Oh, this is so beautiful. I love how you’ve constructed it. The similarities and differences of each scene are really wonderfully well done, and I love their characterisation throughout. The idea of Lucius having a lopsided smile made me ridiculously happy, too. That whole passage was adorable.
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Date: 2017-11-04 12:21 pm (UTC)From:Really lovely work, MA!